Posté le: 08 Mai 2009, 22:13 |
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Gundam 00 & Gundam 00 S2 |
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NeoDarkF
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Inscrit le: 29 Avr 2009 Messages: 2
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J'ai fait quelques couvertures de Gundam 00
On m'a demandé de les traduire en français, alors j'ai mis ici aussi
J'espère qu'il est affiché à la bonne place.
Pour des commentaires en anglais mieux XD
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Posté le: 10 Mai 2009, 08:49 |
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Phoenix
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Inscrit le: 29 Avr 2005 Messages: 1799
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Hello NeoDarkF ^^
Thank you for posting your covers here.
If there are finished, it's the right section
It's nice and fit to the gundam series. The only thing which I think it will make it better is the choice of the font of the summary. A futurist font will be more appropriate. For the frame of the summary, I think it will be more beautiful without the blur effect and a scare outline for the frame.
On the middle cover, you sign with your "pseudo" on the first cover and not on the others, it's strange. The better is not to sign the middle cover but only the back.
In the back, there is 2 signs, NeoDarF and eRdM. I think, it is too much. Only one is necessary
otherwise, nothing else to say
You are not forced to modify them, it's your covers and if you like them like that, it's the essential.
You can keep my remarks for the other covers you'll do
I hope my english is not too bad and you'll understand me ^^ |
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Posté le: 10 Mai 2009, 22:45 |
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NeoDarkF
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Inscrit le: 29 Avr 2009 Messages: 2
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Thanks for coments.
There are finished, then, they are in right place XD
I think the font is futuristic enought, don't you? XD
In the middle only one logotype is necesary.
The eRdM logotype, is used in that webpage for the covers designers, thats why I put it XD
Too work change now the covers. I keep your remarks for future covers ^^
Your english is very good, I understood everything XD |
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Posté le: 11 Mai 2009, 08:18 |
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Phoenix
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Well, you're right, the font is already futuristic ^^
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